The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011

The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011
The bar chart provides
average
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the average
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monthly distribution of rainfall in
mm
in Brazilia from 2001 until 2011. December and January are the
heavilly
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heavily
rainy
monthes
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months
,
whic
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which
are accounted for 247.4 and 246mm respectively. From January till June amount of rainfall steadily
decrease
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decreases
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,
where
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whereas
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in June it reaches the bottom at 8.7mm.
Then
remain constant in the summer. In September indicators
at
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were at
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55.2
mm
,
then
it sharply
increase
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increases
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in October
till
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to
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166.6. From October till
December
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December,
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it
continue
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continues
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to
goes
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go
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up but not that fast.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual rainfall
  • millimeters
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • anomaly
  • climatic event
  • precipitation
  • hydrological cycle
  • evaporation
  • condensation
  • meteorological data
  • arid
  • humid
  • drought
  • flood
  • sustainable water management
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