A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called The book that Influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most, In your letter describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to your interesting topic, the
book
that influenced me most, which needs our contributions. I hope
this
letter finds you well. I would like to tell you about the
book
named Sinoha which influenced me most.
This
book
is a historical biography of an ancient medical doctor who lived in 300 BC. In
this
book
, he described the society and
also
the common stereotypes of those days. He had travelled to several cities and described the events on his route in great detail. He indicates the stereotypes among folks which make them to be slave in their whole lives.
Moreover
, he talked about sculptures which were pried as different gods, and he demonstrated the events which made him lose his fate to fake gods. The way of his thinking and his standpoints not only influenced me but
also
helped me to be aware of modern stereotypes. I think the impact of the
book
on people is undeniable. If someone reads
this
book
without any previous judgment, a graceful change in their lives will be considerable. Please feel free to contact me if you need
further
information. Yours sincerely Ali A
Submitted by ali on

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Be sure to develop each point fully to add depth to your writing. For instance, you could elaborate more on how the book changed your way of thinking, giving specific examples of stereotypes it challenged and how that shaped your worldview. This will enrich the description of the book's influence on you.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a logical flow by expanding on the book's details before jumping to its personal impact on you. This will make the transition between the description of the book and its influence on you more natural.
coherence cohesion
To boost coherence, ensure that each paragraph maintains a central focus. For example, when talking about the biography, highlight a central theme that links to the subsequent point about its influence on you.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • influenced
  • contributions
  • readers
  • 'The Alchemist'
  • Paulo Coelho
  • embarks
  • journey
  • personal legend
  • valuable
  • life lessons
  • inspiring
  • pursue
  • themes
  • following one's heart
  • seeking adventure
  • embracing the unknown
  • resonate
  • wide range
  • potential
  • inspire
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