The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The column chart gives information about three different
team
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's scores in four
years
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of competition.
Overall
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,
Team
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B had scored the highest
score
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for four consecutive
years
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,
while
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Team
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A's
score
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was the lowest in the two first
years
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,
otherwise
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, the remains belonged to
Team
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C. To commence with, the highest
score
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record was in 2001, booked by
team
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B at 82
points
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. Despite its downward trend in the following
years
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,
thus
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, reaching its lowest point in 2003 at 43
points
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,
Team
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A was able to keep its position on the top. In 2004, the
team
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had reached an increase of 12
points
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to 55
points
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. Meanwhile, in the two first
years
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,
Team
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A had the lowest
score
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in classmen at 5
points
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, whilst
Team
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C had 5
points
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higher than its counterpart. The trend remained the same in the next year, with the gap shrinking by 4
points
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. Yet, in the two
last
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years
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,
team
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A's
score
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surpassed
Team
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B's
score
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almost threefold.
Moreover
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,
although
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Team
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A was still leading for the
score
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in the
last
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period, the gap only remained by 3
points
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words team, years, score, points with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 3 times.
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