The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The column chart gives information about three different
team
's scores in four Use synonyms
years
of competition. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
Team
B had scored the highest Use synonyms
score
for four consecutive Use synonyms
years
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
Team
A's Use synonyms
score
was the lowest in the two first Use synonyms
years
, Use synonyms
otherwise
, the remains belonged to Linking Words
Team
C.
To commence with, the highest Use synonyms
score
record was in 2001, booked by Use synonyms
team
B at 82 Use synonyms
points
. Despite its downward trend in the following Use synonyms
years
, Use synonyms
thus
, reaching its lowest point in 2003 at 43 Linking Words
points
, Use synonyms
Team
A was able to keep its position on the top. In 2004, the Use synonyms
team
had reached an increase of 12 Use synonyms
points
to 55 Use synonyms
points
.
Meanwhile, in the two first Use synonyms
years
, Use synonyms
Team
A had the lowest Use synonyms
score
in classmen at 5 Use synonyms
points
, whilst Use synonyms
Team
C had 5 Use synonyms
points
higher than its counterpart. The trend remained the same in the next year, with the gap shrinking by 4 Use synonyms
points
. Yet, in the two Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
years
, Use synonyms
team
A's Use synonyms
score
surpassed Use synonyms
Team
B's Use synonyms
score
almost threefold. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
although
Linking Words
Team
A was still leading for the Use synonyms
score
in the Use synonyms
last
period, the gap only remained by 3 Linking Words
points
.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words team, years, score, points with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 3 times.
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