The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The column chart gives information about three different
team
's scores in four years
of competition. Overall
, Team
B had scored the highest score
for four consecutive years
, while
Team
A's score
was the lowest in the two first years
, otherwise
, the remains belonged to Team
C.
To commence with, the highest score
record was in 2001, booked by team
B at 82 points
. Despite its downward trend in the following years
, thus
, reaching its lowest point in 2003 at 43 points
, Team
A was able to keep its position on the top. In 2004, the team
had reached an increase of 12 points
to 55 points
.
Meanwhile, in the two first years
, Team
A had the lowest score
in classmen at 5 points
, whilst Team
C had 5 points
higher than its counterpart. The trend remained the same in the next year, with the gap shrinking by 4 points
. Yet, in the two last
years
, team
A's score
surpassed Team
B's score
almost threefold. Moreover
, although
Team
A was still leading for the score
in the last
period, the gap only remained by 3 points
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Vocabulary: Replace the words team, years, score, points with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 3 times.
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