The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The column chart gives information about three different
team
's scores in four
years
of competition.
Overall
,
Team
B had scored the highest
score
for four consecutive
years
,
while
Team
A's
score
was the lowest in the two first
years
,
otherwise
, the remains belonged to
Team
C. To commence with, the highest
score
record was in 2001, booked by
team
B at 82
points
. Despite its downward trend in the following
years
,
thus
, reaching its lowest point in 2003 at 43
points
,
Team
A was able to keep its position on the top. In 2004, the
team
had reached an increase of 12
points
to 55
points
. Meanwhile, in the two first
years
,
Team
A had the lowest
score
in classmen at 5
points
, whilst
Team
C had 5
points
higher than its counterpart. The trend remained the same in the next year, with the gap shrinking by 4
points
. Yet, in the two
last
years
,
team
A's
score
surpassed
Team
B's
score
almost threefold.
Moreover
,
although
Team
A was still leading for the
score
in the
last
period, the gap only remained by 3
points
.
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