The Bar Chart Shows the Scores of Teams a, B, and C Over Four Different Seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The Bar Chart Shows the Scores of Teams a, B, and C Over Four Different Seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided column chart illustrates the
points
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obtained by
Teams
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A,
B
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, and
C
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across four distinct seasons. Notably,
Team
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B
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outperformed the others consistently, securing the highest scores from 2002 to 2005.
Conversely
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, the lowest score shifted from
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A in 2002 to
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C
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in 2004. Commencing with the year 2002,
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B
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achieved 82
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,
while
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Teams
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C
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and A lagged behind with 10 and 5
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, respectively.
This
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trend persisted in 2003, with
Team
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B
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experiencing a 20-point decrease,
while
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Teams
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A and
C
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saw increases of 6 and 5
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, respectively. In 2004, there was a notable shift as
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C
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replaced
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A with the lowest scores.
Team
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B
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witnessed a decline to its lowest score of 43
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,
while
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Team
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C
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also
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experienced a decrease to 12
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.
Conversely
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,
Team
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A demonstrated a significant improvement, nearly tripling its score to 35
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.
Additionally
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, in 2005,
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B
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's scores rose to 55
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,
while
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Teams
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A and
C
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witnessed declines of 8 and 5
points
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, respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "conversely, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words points, teams, b, c, team with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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