the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

the graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
The line graph compares how
many
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waste
produced
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was produced
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by three different companies in the period of 15 years.
It is clear that
over the period of 15 years, the
waste
produced by
company
C
kept increasing,
while
company
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companies
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A and
B
had been reducing their produced
waste
. Looking at the information in more detail, in the
year
of
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2000,
company
A
had
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produced the highest amount of
waste
(12
tons
in a
year
), followed
with
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company
B
(
near
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9
tons
in a
year
).
In
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contrary
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,
company
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C
produced the least
waste
(around 3
tons
) that
year
.
On
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2005,
company
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A remained
as
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the highest producer of
waste
(around 11
tons
a
year
) even though there
is
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was
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a visible effort to decrease the number.
On the other hand
,
company
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companies
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B
and
C
had
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produced more
waste
amounted
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amounting
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to 10
tons
and 6
tons
a
year
respectively.
However
, during the
year
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years
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of
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2005 to 2015,
company
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companies
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A and
B
had been taking some actions to reduce their
waste
.
This
resulted in visibly lower
waste
in both
company
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companies
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A and
B
, producing around 8
tons
and 3
tons
in a
year
respectively. Yet, the figure in
company
C
steadily increased from time to time, resulting in around 9
tons
of
waste
produced in the
year
of
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2015.
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