9/2 The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
The table illustrates the
begining
and maximum Correct your spelling
beginning
salary
of secondary education teachers
in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg
, Japan and Korean
in 2009.
Correct your spelling
Korea
Overall
, the data reveals teachers
in Luxembourg
had the highest original and maximum salary
, Japan was the second highest. In contrast
, Australian teachers
had the lowest income.
In the first year of teaching, teachers
earned 80,000 dollars
when they worked in Luxembourg
, and Australian
only obtained 28,000 Fix the agreement mistake
Australians
dollars
. After 15 years
period, the income of Australian educational workers Fix the agreement mistake
year
raised
to 48,000 Verb problem
rose
dollars
which was the maximum, and it took nine years
for them to reach this
number. However
, 119,000 dollars
was not the maximum salary
for teachers
in Luxembourg
after fifteen years
teaching
, they totally needed three decades to reach the Change preposition
of teaching
higest
Correct your spelling
highest
salary
which was 132,000 dollars
.
Secondly
, Japanese teachers
had 34,000 dollars
in their first year, it
was the third Correct pronoun usage
which
higest
, after fifteen Correct your spelling
highest
years
, the number increased to 65,000 and teachers
will gain 86,000 dollars
in maximum, as they spend 37 years
for this
career.Submitted by chaoweikevin on
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