The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

The bar graph depicts how many Japanese travellers

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overseas by millions from 1985 to 1995.

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, the line graph illustrates

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Australia's percentages of the Japanese tourist market. From an

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perspective, it is readily apparent that overseas travel showed

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popularity over these reporting periods,

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while

, the rate of these travellers visiting Australia increased. In 1985, there are roughly 5

million

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of the population in Japan went to international

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. After half a decade,

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number approximately doubled, till reached 11

million

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in 1990.

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, there was a marginal decline in

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amount by almost one

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in 1991. In the following years,

those share

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significantly rose and peaked at moderately below 16

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at the end

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of

period

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. Moving onto the second chart, the Australian territory only received 2% of the total in 1982. Interestingly,

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number went up

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slightly

by 3%

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after

four years,

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it decreased in 1989. Since

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, there

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an upward trend in Australia's share of Japan's tourist market, till finished at 6

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in 1995.