The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
The bar graph depicts how many Japanese travellers
going
overseas by millions from 1985 to 1995. Wrong verb form
went
Besides
, the line graph illustrates the
Australia's percentages of the Japanese tourist market.
From an Correct article usage
apply
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that overseas travel showed increase
popularity over these reporting periods, Wrong verb form
increased
whils
, the rate of these travellers visiting Australia increased.
In 1985, there are roughly 5 Correct your spelling
while
million
of the population in Japan went to international destination
. After half a decade, Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
this
number approximately doubled, till reached 11 million
in 1990. However
, there was a marginal decline in this
amount by almost one million
in 1991. In the following years, those share
significantly rose and peaked at moderately below 16 Change the determiner
that share
those shares
million
at the end
of period
.
Moving onto the second chart, the Australian territory only received 2% of the total in 1982. Interestingly, Add an article
the period
this
number went up slighly
by 3% Correct your spelling
slightly
afte
four years, Correct your spelling
after
then
it decreased in 1989. Since then
, there was
an upward trend in Australia's share of Japan's tourist market, till finished at 6 Wrong verb form
has been
million
in 1995.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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