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The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.

The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.
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The line chart illustrates the comparisons of the Gross Domestic
Product
 (GDP) in
Bangladesh
,
Pakitastan
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Pakistan
, Nepal, and
Malaysia
 in
billions
 of US
dollar
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dollars
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. It is noticeable that
Gross
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the Gross
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 Domestic
Product
 of all countries
increasing
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increased
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 in a half decade from 2010 to 2015.
Furthermore
, the highest
increased
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which
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is
Bangladesh
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in Bangladesh
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 and Pakistan. In 2010, we can see that the Gross Domestic
Product
 for several countries had
different
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a different
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number
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numbers
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 which
were
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 the proportion of
the
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Malaysia
, Pakistan,
Bangladesh
, and
Nepas
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Nepal
 was approximately 250, 180, 120, and 30 in
billions
 of U.S.
dollars
, respectively.
Moreover
, the gap between Nepal and
Bangladesh
 was 100
billions
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billion
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dollars
 in 2010 but the Gross Domestic
Product
 of
Bangladesh
was
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dramaticaly
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dramatically
 increased from 2012 to 2015 and the Gross Domestic
Product
 of Nepal
was
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slightly increased.
Consequently
, the gap between
Bangladesh
 and Nepal
increase
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increased
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 until reached
from
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120 billion
dollars
 to 150 billion
dollars
.
On the other hand
, the Gross Domestic
Product
 of
Pakistal
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Pakistan
 rose increased during
period
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the period
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 2010 to 2015
which
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when
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 the amount of Gross Domestic
Product
 was 180
billions
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billion
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of
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U.S.
dollar
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dollars
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 to more than 200
billions
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billion
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of
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U.S.
dollar
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dollars
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.
In addition
, the range of Gross Domestic
Product
 (GDP) between Pakistan and
Malaysia
 was fall because the Gross Domestic
Product
 of
Malaysia
 had sharply decreased from 350 to 290
billions
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billion
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of
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apply
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U.S.
dollar
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dollars
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words product, bangladesh, malaysia, billions, dollar, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product
  • economic performance
  • growth rate
  • stagnation
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • economic boom
  • recession
  • industrial sectors
  • projection
  • fiscal policy
  • economic indicator
  • per capita income
  • purchasing power parity
  • upward trend
  • downturn
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