Nowadays, in some
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number of young adults who prefer to spend their whole
weekends
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homes.
This
is because
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generation likes to isolate themselves and spend
time
on their own.
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our society because youngsters are
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getting detached from
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world.
In my
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young
people
like international students or full-
time
workers who live away from their hometown are most likely to spend their
weekends
at their homes, there can be many reasons
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this
situation.
Firstly
, most
people
work or study Monday to Friday so, they like to spend their weekend relaxing, doing house chores or some pending tasks that they were unable to do during the week.
Secondly
, young
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do not want to
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with other humans because they have social anxiety and
moreover
,
people
become more
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when they start getting responsibilities of work etc. For some
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hand, it is actually not.
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at home
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them lazy, they do not indulge themselves in any outdoor activities or social works that not only spend their
time
but
also
they can learn new things. Sitting on your couch or
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on your bed for the whole weekend
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them feel
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and
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a new week they get more and more tired. Isolating themselves on Saturdays and Sundays
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only happening because of social
with others. In
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,
people
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to go out
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weekends
with their families or friends and do some interesting activities that
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them feel more energetic and
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for a new week. But, the ongoing trend is having
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impact on
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and mental health of the young
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.
To conclude
,
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has its positive and negative side, excess of anything is harmful
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. Staying home at
weekends
is good until it becomes a habit. If someone is
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happy in his/her present, they will for sure be suffering to spend their days off in future. So,
instead
of choosing to spend your
time
at home, do some outdoor activities that will make you physically and mentally strong.