The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type.
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data about hundred
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passenger miles traveled (
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)
's
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incidents
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and
injuries
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by four different types of
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and demand response. Notably, demand response is the main contributor
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incidents
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and
injuries
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, and commuter
rail
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is the lowest.
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of
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are
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always outnumbering
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. Commence with mode of transportation, Demand Response
persist
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to score more than 150
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PMT
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for both
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and
injuries
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.
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Bus
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,
Light
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rail
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, Heavy
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, and Commuter
rail
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only book lower than 100
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PMT
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.
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number
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of
injuries
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are always
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all
rail
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-mode
transportations
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,
however
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, the incident's
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slightly lower than
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Light
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trail. Regarding
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number
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a number
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of
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and
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, Commuter
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is the safest mode with the lowest
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and
injuries
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by around 25
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PMT
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. The
number
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of
incident's
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between Heavy
rail
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and
Light
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rail
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has no big difference.
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, Heavy
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, Bus, and
Light
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rail
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have relatively similar
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number
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,
then
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surge heavily, five times higher than those.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, pmt, incidents, injuries, rail, number, light with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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