The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type.
The provided bar charts
shows
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data about hundred
million
passenger miles traveled (
PMT
)
's
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apply
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incidents
and
injuries
by four different types of
transportations
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and demand response. Notably, demand response is the main contributor
for
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incidents
and
injuries
, and commuter
rail
is the lowest.
In addition
, the
number
of
incidents
are
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always outnumbering
injuries
. Commence with mode of transportation, Demand Response
persist
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to score more than 150
million
PMT
for both
incidents
and
injuries
.
Conversely
,
Bus
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Buses
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,
Light
rail
, Heavy
rail
, and Commuter
rail
only book lower than 100
million
PMT
.
Bus's
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number
of
injuries
are always
surpass
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all
rail
-mode
transportations
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transportation
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,
however
, the incident's
number
slightly lower than
Light
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the Light
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trail. Regarding
number
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a number
the number
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of
incidents
and
injuries
, Commuter
rail
is the safest mode with the lowest
incidents
and
injuries
by around 25
million
PMT
. The
number
of
incident's
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incidents
incident
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between Heavy
rail
and
Light
rail
has no big difference.
Moreover
, Heavy
rail
, Bus, and
Light
rail
have relatively similar
number
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numbers
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of
incidents
,
then
surge heavily, five times higher than those.
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