The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type.
The provided bar charts
shows
data about hundred Change the verb form
show
million
passenger miles traveled (PMT
)'s
Change noun form
apply
incidents
and injuries
by four different types of transportations
and demand response. Notably, demand response is the main contributor Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
for
Change preposition
to
incidents
and injuries
, and commuter rail
is the lowest. In addition
, the number
of incidents
are
always outnumbering Change the verb form
is
injuries
.
Commence with mode of transportation, Demand Response persist
to score more than 150 Change the verb form
persists
million
PMT
for both incidents
and injuries
. Conversely
, Bus
, Fix the agreement mistake
Buses
Light
rail
, Heavy rail
, and Commuter rail
only book lower than 100 million
PMT
. Bus's
Correct article usage
The Bus's
number
of injuries
are always surpass
all Correct subject-verb agreement
surpasses
rail
-mode transportations
, Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
however
, the incident's number
slightly lower than Light
trail.
Regarding Correct article usage
the Light
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
incidents
and injuries
, Commuter rail
is the safest mode with the lowest incidents
and injuries
by around 25 million
PMT
. The number
of incident's
between Heavy Change the noun form
incidents
incident
rail
and Light
rail
has no big difference. Moreover
, Heavy rail
, Bus, and Light
rail
have relatively similar number
of Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
incidents
, then
surge heavily, five times higher than those.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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