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Should Newspaper not publish personal life of Politicians. DO you agree or disagree.

#newspaper #life #politicians
Everyone has secrets nowadays
which
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 they
tried
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 to hide from society. A number of our community is like to gossip regarding
famouse
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famous
 personality. I totally disagree with the trend of spreading private information of
administratives
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administrators
 to the journal. Not only because it identifies the crisis and
inlarger
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increases
 the rate of insecurity
also
mix
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 up
peace
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the peace
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 of other's.
Firstly
, some topics are not to be disclosed by leaders. As they don't like to
be
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have
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 dinner table
conversation
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conversations
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 so, they
tried
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try
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 to put in
hiding
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a hiding
the hiding
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 place their misdeeds.
Moreover
 , frequently they have to face disaster
due to
to
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healines
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headlines
 of tv.
For instance
,
BBC
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a BBC
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 News survey proved that 40%
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of individuals
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individuals
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individual
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 blunders are reasons
of
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for
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downfall
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the downfall
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 of government servants. Secondarily,
majority
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the majority
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 of people are influenced by public figures. Despite
of
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apply
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that,how hard their life is
humas
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humans
 are seeking for
ideal's
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ideal
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 lifestyle.
Additionally
,
large
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a large
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 number of
men's
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men
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 and
women's
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women
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misguided themselves because of the publicity of
boardsheets
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broadsheets
board sheets
.
Refer to
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, online poll outcome disclosed that 50% of
public
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the public
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 is unpleased
of
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with
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 what they have . In the end,
self space
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self-space
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 is the right of each and every citizen.
However
, few
of
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apply
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magazine
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magazines
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publish
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apply
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recognized
recoginized
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recognise
person's
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a person's
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 profile status just because of money.
while
,
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 caring
no
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about no
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 one's emotions
To sum up
, I disbelief
with
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in
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 the fact
to
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of
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revel
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revealing
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 life stories
to
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in
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polictical
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political
place
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places
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.
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