The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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illustrate
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transformation
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in Grage
park
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Park
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from 1920 to its present state. At a glance, it can be observed that
while
the stage for performing music plays, fountain, glasshouse, cafe, and pond were deconstructed, the
nothern
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northern
rose garden, entrances of both
nortern
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northern
and southern sides have been remaining in the same place. Surprisingly, an entrance for parking lots located underground of the
park
was built in the east-southern zone of the present
park
. Looking at the changes in the western side of the
park
, more closely, the stage for
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a musician
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musician
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was repurposed
in to
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the new
amphitheater
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for performing concerts;
moreover
, the fountain located in the centre of the
park
in 1920
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been replaced by the rose garden and surrounded by seats which once were settled in other parts of the western area. Moving on to the eastern side, the pound once used for growing some water plants has been moved to the southern side of the
park
for water
feature
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, and has been replaced by playing
field
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fields
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for children.
Furthermore
, the rose garden
where
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it
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used to be close to the pond in 1920 has been
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to
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a cafe next to the
nothern
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northern
entrance gate.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pond
  • northwest corner
  • large central open area
  • residential areas
  • community-oriented space
  • playground
  • eastern border
  • parking lot
  • convenience
  • commercial zone
  • amenities
  • walking path
  • encircles
  • joggers
  • accessible
  • entrances
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