The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The given map

illustrate

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illustrates

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transformation

Correct article usage

the transformation

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in Grage

Use synonyms

park

Capitalize word

Park

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from 1920 to its present state. At a glance, it can be observed that

while

Linking Words

the stage for performing music plays, fountain, glasshouse, cafe, and pond were deconstructed, the

nothern

Correct your spelling

northern

rose garden, entrances of both

nortern

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northern

and southern sides have been remaining in the same place. Surprisingly, an entrance for parking lots located underground of the

park

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was built in the east-southern zone of the present

park

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. Looking at the changes in the western side of the

park

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, more closely, the stage for

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a musician

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musician

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musicians

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was repurposed

in to

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into

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the new

amphitheater

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amphitheatre

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for performing concerts;

moreover

Linking Words

, the fountain located in the centre of the

park

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in 1920

have

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has

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been replaced by the rose garden and surrounded by seats which once were settled in other parts of the western area. Moving on to the eastern side, the pound once used for growing some water plants has been moved to the southern side of the

park

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for water

feature

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features

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, and has been replaced by playing

field

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fields

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for children.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, the rose garden

where

Correct word choice

which

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Correct pronoun usage

apply

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used to be close to the pond in 1920 has been

transform

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transforming

transformed

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Change preposition

into

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a cafe next to the

nothern

Correct your spelling

northern

entrance gate.

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Feb 10, 2024

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

200 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pond
northwest corner
large central open area
residential areas
community-oriented space
playground
eastern border
parking lot
convenience
commercial zone
amenities
walking path
encircles
joggers
accessible
entrances

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