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The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given map
illustrate
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illustrates
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transformation
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the transformation
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 in Grage
park
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Park
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 from 1920 to its present state. At a glance, it can be observed that
while
 the stage for performing music plays, fountain, glasshouse, cafe, and pond were deconstructed, the
nothern
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northern
 rose garden, entrances of both
nortern
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northern
 and southern sides have been remaining in the same place. Surprisingly, an entrance for parking lots located underground of the
park
 was built in the east-southern zone of the present
park
. Looking at the changes in the western side of the
park
, more closely, the stage for
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a musician
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musician
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musicians
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 was repurposed
in to
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into
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 the new
amphitheater
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amphitheatre
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 for performing concerts;
moreover
, the fountain located in the centre of the
park
 in 1920
have
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has
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 been replaced by the rose garden and surrounded by seats which once were settled in other parts of the western area. Moving on to the eastern side, the pound once used for growing some water plants has been moved to the southern side of the
park
 for water
feature
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features
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, and has been replaced by playing
field
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fields
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 for children.
Furthermore
, the rose garden
where
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which
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it
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apply
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used to be close to the pond in 1920 has been
transform
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transforming
transformed
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to
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into
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 a cafe next to the
nothern
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northern
 entrance gate.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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