The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given map
illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrates
transformation
in Grage Correct article usage
the transformation
park
from 1920 to its present state. At a glance, it can be observed that Capitalize word
Park
while
the stage for performing music plays, fountain, glasshouse, cafe, and pond were deconstructed, the nothern
rose garden, entrances of both Correct your spelling
northern
nortern
and southern sides have been remaining in the same place. Surprisingly, an entrance for parking lots located underground of the Correct your spelling
northern
park
was built in the east-southern zone of the present park
.
Looking at the changes in the western side of the park
, more closely, the stage for Add an article
a musician
musician
was repurposed Fix the agreement mistake
musicians
in to
the new Join the words
into
amphitheater
for performing concerts; Change the spelling
amphitheatre
moreover
, the fountain located in the centre of the park
in 1920 have
been replaced by the rose garden and surrounded by seats which once were settled in other parts of the western area.
Moving on to the eastern side, the pound once used for growing some water plants has been moved to the southern side of the Change the verb form
has
park
for water feature
, and has been replaced by playing Fix the agreement mistake
features
field
for children. Fix the agreement mistake
fields
Furthermore
, the rose garden where
Correct word choice
which
it
used to be close to the pond in 1920 has been Correct pronoun usage
apply
transform
Change the verb form
transforming
transformed
to
a cafe next to the Change preposition
into
nothern
entrance gate.Correct your spelling
northern
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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