‎ Some young people leave the countryside to live in cities or towns, leaving only ‎older people in the countryside. What are the problems of this issue? What can ‎be done to solve this problem?‎

Nowadays, the young generation

tend

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to move to cities or towns from the

countryside

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, and the

population

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of only elderly

people

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accounts for the majority in the

coutryside

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countryside

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essay will explore several issues that have been caused by

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unbalanced

population

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, and I will explore a possibly effective countermeasure to improve

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problem.

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, the less density of young

people

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affects convenience and

excitiment

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excitement

of the individuals'

life

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in

coutryside

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countryside

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, the total

population

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in the

countryside

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decrease relatively.

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trend impacts the number of shops and social services, including supermarkets,

restaurants

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and restaurants

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, resulting in

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closure

their

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businesses

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the

hoplessness

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hopelessness

in

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growth.

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,

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significant transition in the

population

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affects the

life

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environment in cities,

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as traffic jams, the incredibly

highier

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high

property market and noise pollution. To

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tackle

take

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problem, one of the

possiblely

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possibly

possible

effective measures is the engagement by the government, by spending their budget

for

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on

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encouraging young families to

welcome

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be welcome

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to the

countryside

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.

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, the government has arranged

the

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particular tax system which is affordable for young

people

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in some rural

areas

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in Japan.

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, the

popluration

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population

of young families in these

areas

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has

been

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recovered from the declining trend indicated for a few decades. In summary, there is a negative trend in the

population

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of

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young generation in the

countryside

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, affecting the convenient and appropriate lifestyle of

people

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in the rural

areas

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.

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,

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it might take some time to improve the quality of

life

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in these

areas

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, the government should take responsibility

of

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for

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problem, engaging sufficient budget for

treatement

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the treatment

of young

families

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families'

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lives, thereby enriching not only young

people

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's

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life

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but

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older

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the older

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generation's living environment in the

countryside

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