In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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cannot deny the fact that

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and

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vehicles

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are

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of the most controversial debates nowadays. Some feel that there are

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of drawbacks;

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am of the opinion that

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outweigh the cons. In the following paragraphs, I will explore the rationale for both beliefs

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proffer justification for my own viewpoint. Regarding those who see more disadvantages, there are many reasons.

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supportive claim is that it is hard to rely on

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because controlling those automobiles

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pretty much impossible, which can lead to unexpected loss of control and

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. More specifically, if

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will not be developed to the level where people can be comfortable enough to use them, they can lead to severe levels of accidents, injuries, and death.

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, some autopilot engines are

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and can fail in some specific conditions.

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, there have been a lot of accidents because of the

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with engines APC and APA.

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, I firmly believe that the advantages of having

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overshadow the disadvantages.

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compelling advantage is that

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AI and

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are considered to be much safer.

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, the car company called Tesla has

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that function perfectly;

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, the number of car accidents is low. Not only are they relatively safer, but

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are much more effective and have reduced fatigue. What is more, using those

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can have financial benefits like not requiring to hire drivers. In sum,

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maintain that having

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might benefit us in many ways. In the future, I sincerely wish that these technologies will be more advanced, so everyone can rely on

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coherence cohesion

The essay provides a mostly coherent response to the prompt with an evident structure. However, the introduction and conclusion could be stronger and more clearly delineated.

coherence cohesion

Main points are supported by some reasoning and examples, yet there could be more detail and depth to the examples provided, thus enhancing their persuasiveness.

task achievement

The essay addresses the question and presents a clear position throughout the response, but it's advisable to explore the nuances of the argument more thoroughly and provide a more balanced discussion before reaching a conclusion.

coherence cohesion

Beware of grammatical mistakes (e.g., 'One cannot deny the fact that...' could be rephrased as 'It is undeniable that...') and capitalization issues ('i' should always be capitalized as 'I'). These errors can detract from the overall clarity and professionalism of the essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

281 words

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. what do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve it?