Some think that experiment done on animals are cruel so it should be prohibited. To what extend do you agree?

Some of the experiments need to be done on a kind of

animals

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animal

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,

while

a

propotion

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portion

of

crowd

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the crowd

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believe

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believes

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this

is too cruel and is better to be halted and

know

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as

illegal

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an illegal

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activity.I

am on

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have

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two different ideas for

this

assumption.

First,

animals

have

emotion

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emotions

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and

underestand

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understand

pains and it not

favored

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favoured

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by some,

next,

these pain and

dangerous

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dangers

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might be experienced by people rather than

animals

if we stop

this

work.I will discuss both

view

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to seek a conclusion. First of all,suffering

animals

to

dicovery

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discover

discovery

new sciences or products might have negative impacts

in

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on

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our

life

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lives

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.The news and videos of these laboratories will be

publisized

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published

inevitably and can be reflected in people's behaviour. A child can be

disapointed

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disappointed

about The World and get depression,

as well as

, an

adoult

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adult

get

anxiety

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and angry,both are results of knowing and

whatching

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watching

hurting

animals

.

For example

, the viral animation which shows how

rabits

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rabbits

pass in make-up manufacturing when they use new materials in their bodies

for

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to

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gain safety was

cause

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because

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of my little

brother

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introverted acts for a week.

On the other hand

, if

scientifics

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scientists

do not experience innovations

on

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in

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specific spacious, it can be expensive in

possible

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possibly

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dangerous for

public

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or time-consuming

in exporting

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to export

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. Despite the cruel activity is not acceptable by some, is a shortcut for producing goods and using medical treatments for curing people and

due to

that it

worth

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is worth

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doing.Take The

Covide-19

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COVID-19

vaccine as

a

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an

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example,it would

took

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have taken

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a long time to find a safe type of that if they had not injected for

monkies

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monkeys

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at first,

subsequently

, more mortality estatistic could

be

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have been

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achieved in the pandemic. In conclusion, killing and hurting

animals

in laboratories

for creating

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beneficial wares

are

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an integral part of the processes

inspite

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in spite

of bad psychological aspects for individuals.So, in my

opinion

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opinion,

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they should maintain their method.