The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart represents male and
female’s
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female
rate
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rates
less
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lower
by
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apply
countries
in some parts of the world for the last
year.
Overall
, women
's rate
for
illiteracy had always been higher than Change preposition
of
men
in all Change noun form
men's
countries
mentioned.
The men
's tendency for not reading books were
always lower compared to Correct subject-verb agreement
was
women
's, ultimately in some nations such
as East Asia
, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Asia
. These countries
held men
's rate
of illiteracy to only around 30%, whereas
in other parts of the world such
as Latin American
and East Correct your spelling
America
Asia
, the number was relatively low, approximately
around 10%.
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at approximately
On the other hand
, women
's trend for not being aware of literacy were
always higher compared to Correct subject-verb agreement
was
men
. This
can clearly be seen in the four countries
mentioned previously, since the rates were almost twice larger
compared to Correct word choice
as high
men
. For example
, in South Asia
, women
's rate
of illiteracy reached the highest of all, which was around 55%, while
men
's rate
was just around 34%.Submitted by nadillamntr on
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