The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart represents male and
female’s
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female
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rate
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rates
less
literacy Correct word choice
lower
by
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apply
countries
in some parts of the world for the Use synonyms
last
year.
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Overall
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women
's Use synonyms
rate
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for
illiteracy had always been higher than Change preposition
of
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men
in all Change noun form
men's
countries
mentioned.
The Use synonyms
men
's tendency for not reading books Use synonyms
were
always lower compared to Correct subject-verb agreement
was
women
's, ultimately in some nations Use synonyms
such
as East Linking Words
Asia
, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Use synonyms
Asia
. These Use synonyms
countries
held Use synonyms
men
's Use synonyms
rate
of illiteracy to only around 30%, Use synonyms
whereas
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such
as Latin Linking Words
American
and East Correct your spelling
America
Asia
, the number was relatively low, Use synonyms
approximately
around 10%.
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at approximately
On the other hand
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women
's trend for not being aware of literacy Use synonyms
were
always higher compared to Correct subject-verb agreement
was
men
. Use synonyms
This
can clearly be seen in the four Linking Words
countries
mentioned previously, since the rates were almost twice Use synonyms
larger
compared to Correct word choice
as high
men
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, in South Linking Words
Asia
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women
's Use synonyms
rate
of illiteracy reached the highest of all, which was around 55%, Use synonyms
while
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men
's Use synonyms
rate
was just around 34%.Use synonyms
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