The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
The line graph draws the conclusion from a survey about the amount of the population living in four nationalities in cities over a period of eight decades with forecasts for the future.
It is clear that
Malaysian city
Fix the agreement mistake
cities
was
by far the most significant means of inhabitants over the period shown,Correct subject-verb agreement
were
conversely
, Thailand provided the lowest proportion of demographic
in 2040.
In 1970,the Philippines and Malaysia had a large number of societies around one-third of the total which the Philippines had more.Thailand had the third rank which was near 20 per cent of the population.Fix the agreement mistake
demographics
Moreover
, Indonesia had a negligible amount of census in the first decade.
All trends of cities have been increasing since 1970, however
, Malaysia will rise dramatically to a peak of above 80% without a decline as well as
Indonesia will have reached 60% by 2040.Thailand
line illustrates a steady growth until Change noun form
Thailand's
fourth
decade .Change the article
the fourth
On the contrary
, the last
tendency has fluctuated these years.Nevertheless
, population growth has been accelerating in all cities in future.Submitted by Hassanihn on
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