The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given column chart illustrates the proportion of Iceland's inhabitants aged in three decades. Notably, groups of 25-54
years
dominated the Use synonyms
population
and steadily increased spanning from 1990 to 2020. The other groups, exceptUse synonyms
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years
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, witnessed
fluctuating trends.
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To begin
with, in the initial period of reports, over 30% of Linking Words
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population
were 25-54 Add an article
the population
years
of age, peaking in 2020 by almost 50%. The youngest group proportions gradually decreased, thereby, widening their gap with the populations of people who have aged between 25 and 54 Use synonyms
years
. The gap peaked in 2020 by more than 35%. Use synonyms
In addition
, the group of 15-Linking Words
24
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24-year-olds
years
old saw a decline in Use synonyms
population
proportion in the three decades. Its percentages fell from around 20% to less than 10%.
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Furthermore
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elder
people proportions never exceed 20% of Replace the word
elderly
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population
. In the beginning, the percentage of the eldest category was slightly under the younger one. But its percentage gradually decreased and surpassed the younger until the Add an article
the population
last
period. Linking Words
Thus
, the group with people aged 55 to 64 had the lowest proportions.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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