The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps display the earlier and the current construction of tourist facilities on an
island
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
island
had a huge development from the way it was. Now it provides a variety of facilities.
The Use synonyms
island
before the development was empty with no Use synonyms
building
Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
with
around 200 meters in the area exceptChange preposition
apply
a
few palms and a beach in the west. Change preposition
for a
Currently
the Add a comma
Currently,
island
has a pier Use synonyms
ina
T shape with two boats and a vehicle track Correct your spelling
in a
at the end
.
Linking Words
Firstly
there Linking Words
is
a lot of accommodations that coterbuot on two sides. The reception is between them,it is the central feature that Correct subject-verb agreement
are
surrounded
by a vehicle track. There is a restaurant that faces the central feature. Add a missing verb
is surrounded
Linking Words
Finally
the Add a comma
Finally,
last
thing is the footpath Linking Words
that is
found all over the accommodations .Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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