The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps display the earlier and the current construction of tourist facilities on an
island
.
Overall
, the
island
had a huge development from the way it was. Now it provides a variety of facilities. The
island
before the development was empty with no
building
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buildings
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with
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apply
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around 200 meters in the area except
a
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for a
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few palms and a beach in the west.
Currently
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Currently,
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the
island
has a pier
ina
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in a
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T shape with two boats and a vehicle track
at the end
.
Firstly
there
is
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a lot of accommodations that coterbuot on two sides. The reception is between them,it is the central feature that
surrounded
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by a vehicle track. There is a restaurant that faces the central feature.
Finally
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the
last
thing is the footpath
that is
found all over the accommodations .
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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