The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.The table shows where money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.The table shows where money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table and charts below illustrate the police budget over 2
years
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between 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table depicts the source of the money and the charts show how it spent. In general, it can be seen that the biggest source of the budget was the National Government and the most money was spent on the salaries of officers and staff.
To begin
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, there were two main sources for the budget, National Government and Local Taxes with a comparison of 175.5m,177.8m, and 91.2m,102.3m respectively in the mentioned
years
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. Other sources
such
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as grants were the third highest one with almost the same amount in 2
years
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above 38m. Despite the most of the money spent was on salaries in both
years
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, there was a steady decrease from 75% to 69%.
However
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, technology had a considerable rise, almost twice from 8% to 14%. Buildings and transport were the only elements which remained stable in the mentioned
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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