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In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of ths outweigh the disadvantages ?

#countries #people #diet #ths
For a healthy life, diet plays a significant role in someone's life. It is generally believed that, in many countries, citizens follow a pure vegetarian diet and
this
 trend is
going
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 popular among them. It has
an
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ample
of
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benifits
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benefits
.
This
 essay will present some points, regarding
to
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this
 notion.
To begin
 with,
According to
 ancient culture,
at
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in
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 many
places
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places,
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 green vegetations are only considered
as
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an edible thing for both animals and humans. Eating
vegetables
 has many benefits, like healthy metabolism, purification of blood, improvement in reflexes and many more.
Moreover
, after consuming
vegeterian
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vegetarian
food
, our body gets all
necessary
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 components which are essential. To prove it, as per the latest survey, it is resulted that the person who
consume
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 more green vegetation are likely to have healthy organs for a long time as compared to those who prefer junk
food
. Even in many institutions, many children are being taught the advantages of
vegetables
.
Furthermore
, there are many different types of green
vegetables
 which
has
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 their own
significance
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 benefits. It is
also
 known that
,
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 green
vegetables
provides
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 the same energy as we get
it
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from Non-veg
food
. The common
benifits
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benefit
 which all the green
food
provide
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 is good eyesight.
Eventhough
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Even though
 some foods are bitter in taste,
but
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after making
it
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them
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 in a proper way, the taste can be changed.
For instance
, Green Coriander is mostly known for providing a better sight,
therfore
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therefore
 it is used as a garnishing in every
food
.
To conclude
, There is no doubt that these green foods provide a lot more
benifits
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benefits
.
However
,
the
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consumption
have
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has
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 been
also
 increased among people
from
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past
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the past
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 few decades. Many Provinces have
also
 decided to go
complete
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 green and for
further
 promotion, many
camp
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camps
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 have been organized to make
understand
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us understand
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 the value of
green-
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green food
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food
 to the people.
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