The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The charts illustrate the rate of individuals who were born inside and outside
Australia
living in different places which are urban, rural, and town from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
, the figure shows that
people
born in cities increased rather than in towns which decreased.
People
who were born outside
Australia
are more than got birth in
Australia
. In 1995,
people
who gave birth in
Australia
in cities was approximately 50 which increased slightly in 2010 to almost 65.
while
the town was 20 and
then
get decreased to about 10. the rural areas were
approximatly
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approximately
30 in 1995 and fell to almost 15 in 2010. As the figure illustrates, the
people
who were born outside
Australia
had the highest rate in cities which was 60 in 1995 and
then
rose to 80 in 2010. Afterwards, the individual rate was high in 1995 by 40
then
decreased sharply to less than 10 in rural areas.
Then
the lowest proportion who gave birth outside
Australia
was in towns by less than 20
then
decreased to less than 10, respectively.
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  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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