The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. you should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

you should write at least 150 words.
The illustration below shows how a heating
system
works in a house. It explains how
water
moves from the outside to different
part
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parts
show examples
of
system
Add an article
the system
a system
show examples
and how
whole
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the whole
show examples
process is made. In conclusion, a heating
system
is
a
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apply
show examples
very complicated and has its parts all over the house. The main parts of the heating
system
include a
water
tank
,
that is
used to fill a
storage
tank
, an overflow pipe, a
storage
tank
, a
boiler
, a pump and hot
water
radiators. First of all, cold
water
comes from outside in the upper part of the building.
Then
it moves to the
boiler
which can be heated with gas or oil. From the
boiler
hot
water
moves to the
storage
tank
to hold it
while
it
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it is
it was
show examples
unused. The
storage
tank
has several pipes used to redirect
water
to different places.
For example
, one pipe goes to taps. The other pipe is connected to hot
water
radiators, which are made of small tubes. To circulate hot
water
radiators connected to the pump, which transport hold
water
back to the
boiler
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words system, water, tank, storage, boiler with synonyms.
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