the following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. summarize the information and make comparison. writ at least 150 words
The graphic depicts the proportion of
transportations
used by citizens in Europe broken down by periods and transport modes. Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
Overall
, it is evident that there are great discrepancies in the way people travel to work over the period
given.
First of all, what is the most striking when looking at the data is the fact that every year, the type of popular vehicles is different. In 1960, for instance
, workers mostly decided to move by foot instead
of the
other transport, Correct article usage
apply
while
the
next Change preposition
in the
period
(1980), using buses is
popular, Wrong verb form
was
however
the number of people who Add the comma(s)
however,
use
other transportation is Wrong verb form
used
there
little disparity. Replace the word
their
In addition
, in 2000, cars were at the top list of transport
types than others.
Correct word choice
other transport
Furthermore
, it can be seen that employees who use both bicycles and feet significantly dropped each period
. On the other hand
, which was in stark contrast, car extremely rose six times and reached a peak 35
%. On the other side, workers who used buses started with over 15% and rose to 25% but Change preposition
of 35
at the end
of the period
, becoming 15%.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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