Although many people value public parks, this space could be better used for the other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and build economics. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is often said that public

parks

should be replaced with structures

such

as high-rise

buildings

and dense

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. I will clearly show why

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disagree with

this

statement since I believe public park plays a vital role

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the city.

To begin

with, some people say replacing public

parks

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residential

areas

could be

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measures

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of overpopulation. First of all, a sufficient number of residential places can alleviate high-cost housing issues.

For instance

, business

buildings

are usually concentrated in certain

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of the city. It is undeniable that a number of commuters are likely to stay near

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their workplace. Overpopulation could be tackled by diminishing the cost of residence by establishing more residential

areas

instead

of maintaining

the

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public

parks

.

On the other hand

, green

areas

are essential for big cities. First and foremost,

lack

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of

parks

in the city could lead to severe environmental

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. To be specific, high-rise

buildings

and apartment

complexs

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complexes

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consume the amount of a factor in environmental pollution,

such

as carbon dioxide. To afford those issues, the

parks

are a crucial part.

Moreover

, public

areas

are not only the lungs of countless

buildings

but

also

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citizens.

For example

, exhausted workers

as well as

students can take their time in green

areas

, and escape from their hectic life.

Also

, keeping

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between green

areas

and productive places could help them to keep healthy mental in their life. In conclusion,

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even though

high density of

population

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could be measured for converting the park

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productive

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places

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,

it is clear that

public

areas

provide

peaceful

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atmosphere for people.

Hence

, I disagree with the statement.