Some people believe that technology has increased the social interaction while others are disagree, discuss both and give your own opinion.

It is often observed that
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number of people prefer to communicate
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untact
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way.
While
some people say that the developed
technology
diminishes the communication between the people,
i
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believe advanced
technology
provides numerous benefits.
To begin
with, there are several reasons that the negative effects which developed
technology
has cannot be ignored. First of all,
communicate
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by technical devices could lead to
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decreased face-to-face interaction.
For instance
, most
of
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users would prefer more convenient and efficient
way
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such
as using chats to spend time with their colleagues or friends. Lack of confronted interaction can ruin not only one's social ability but
also
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precious time that they spend together
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face-to-face.
Moreover
, it is discriminative for some specific groups. To be specific,
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generation
as well as
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not skilled at
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the
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technology
can be isolated by social interaction.
On the other hand
,
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of
technology
contributes to
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a variety of opportunities to interact with others. First and foremost, they allow
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connect with anyone
in
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anywhere,
such
as
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those who
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are in remote locations.
For example
,
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an applications
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applications
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application
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called "kakao talk" is one of the most used applications in South Korea. They
provides
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the functions
such
as video calls, voice calls and voice messages with
an
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any payment,
also
, they
doesn't
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matter where you are. It is acceptable to anyone who can deal with the functions. In conclusion, it seems convincing that developed
technology
has negative effects, I believe benefits override the drawbacks.
Hence
, it is important that accept the improvement
what
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society achieved and we should find
out
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an appropriate way to use technical devices.
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