The map shows the developments which took place the coastal resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
The two maps show the changes that have been made in the Templeton coastal resort from 1990 to 2005.
It can be seen that the resort shifts to provide more facilities with
reduction
Add an article
a reduction
the reduction
on
almost all green areas.
In 1990, it is evident that the place Change preposition
in
remain
had some trees before several Wrong verb form
remained
construction
Change to a plural noun
constructions
has been
made. Both Wrong verb form
were
in
the north and south Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
side
of the coastal Fix the agreement mistake
sides
area
, several houses have been transformed into apartments, Use synonyms
however
, at the same moment, some houses are Linking Words
also
been built Linking Words
in
the north Change preposition
on
side
of Use synonyms
hospital
. Add an article
the hospital
Furthermore
, those buildings have been relocated as the place was being Linking Words
occuppied
with the supermarket.
Correct your spelling
occupied
According to
the map, it can Linking Words
also
be noticed that Linking Words
old
railway has been extended, passing the new ferry facilities, to the south Correct article usage
the old
side
of the coastal Use synonyms
area
. On the north of that, there was a factory that Use synonyms
has
been built by demolishing the previous residential Wrong verb form
had
area
, which Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
occured
on the Correct your spelling
occurred
area
of the south Use synonyms
side
of the school. Use synonyms
In addition
, there was an airport that Linking Words
has
been constructed on the north Wrong verb form
had
side
of the old school building.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side, area with synonyms.
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