Some people believe that celebrities have a positive effect on society, while others think that their effect is harmful and negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
At present, whilst opponents hold the view that some influencers have detrimental effects on the community, proponents have a diverse perspective.
However
, I am a staunch believer that some entertainers positively affect the youth because their deeds are inspiring and appropriate.
On the one hand, a category of individuals Linking Words
believe
that singers, actors, or football players have detrimental effects on the community, and they do not have a prominent role in society compared to other vocations. Change the verb form
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In other words
, if teachers who educate a myriad of generations or doctors who put at least ten years of their lives Linking Words
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hectic study and saving people's lives are followed and imitated by juveniles, they will help their society more than famous figures whoChange preposition
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violence, erroneous thoughts and immoral Correct your spelling
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behaviors
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behaviours
For instance
, the superstar Mohamed Ramadan" receives millions of pounds for presenting violent content that diffuses atrocities, promotes smoking, or even encourages drinking alcoholic beverages. Linking Words
Thus
, what can be said is that these enormous earnings received by errant entertainers provoke workers in other hard-working professions.
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On the other hand
, some celebrities are worthy of being praised because they have an indispensable role. To illustrate, when some glamorous characters generously contribute to philanthropic associations by making monetary donations towards health facilities and when they launch awareness campaigns, they constructively influence adolescents. Linking Words
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can be exemplified by the Egyptian footballer "Mohamed Salah" who encouraged a plethora of young people to combat addiction Linking Words
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the anti-drug campaign that he initiated. Change preposition
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appreciation awards as it becomes Change preposition
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that some megastars can rebuild morals in the world.
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essay has manifested the points mentioned above, it can be reiterated that some influencers inspire and admonish the youth and caution them against crooked practices. I am convinced that exemplary public figures who are of high repute are worthy of being well-paid.Linking Words
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task achievement
Clearly establish your stance on the issue at the beginning of your essay to ensure the reader is immediately aware of your viewpoint. This will also help in maintaining a focused argument throughout.
coherence cohesion
Use a wider range of linking devices to better connect your ideas and paragraphs. Phrases such as 'Furthermore', 'Moreover', 'Conversely', and 'On the contrary' can enhance the flow of your argument.
task achievement
Strive for a balanced discussion by allocating similar lengths and depths of analysis to both views. Ensure that each viewpoint is given comprehensive consideration to demonstrate an unbiased evaluation before presenting your opinion.
coherence cohesion
Employ a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to enrich your essay. This not only engages the reader but also showcases your proficiency in English. Avoid repetitions of words and phrases when possible.