Nowdays, many people have to work long time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What employers can do to make their life easier?
One of the main controversial issues in today's life is the long working hours for employees which causes more stress and worsening conditions and depression among them. There are numerous reasons behind that
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some suggestions may help to increase the hourly rate of salary and use technology to reduce workload.
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