The map shows the developments which took place the coastal resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
The pair of maps depict the
altenation
in the layout of the coastal resort Correct your spelling
alternation
alienation
alteration
that is
called Templeton divided by 15 years, illustrating how the area underwent expansion over this
period of time in terms of residental
areas, transportation services and biodiversity havens.
A panoramic view of the maps unveils the full picture of urban development.
In the north and northeast corner of the town, the Hospital and the school remained preserved. Flanking the main railway road on one side, The Correct your spelling
residential
new
constructed factory can be observed. Connected to the the railway station by a new railroad, The Ferry played an important role Change the adjective
newly
of
Change preposition
in
transportation
system. Add an article
the transportation
Also
many Add a comma
Also,
of
singular houses transformed Change preposition
apply
to
Change preposition
into
residental
complexes. A lot of green spaces Correct your spelling
residential
has been
removed in 2005.
Wrong verb form
were
To sum up
, many people have been immigrate
to the coastal city of Templeton Change the verb form
immigrating
immigrated
due to
achieved
job opportunities Wrong verb form
achieve
that
as the infrastructures and facilities became accessible to them in the coastal city.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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