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The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the
percentage
 of the
population
 in four Asian countries from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, the
least
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lowest
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percentage
allocated
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was allocated
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 to
Indonesia
 in 1970 and the highest
percentage
predicted
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was predicted
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 for
Malaysia
in
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apply
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70 years later. All countries’
population
 will be grown
according to
 the line graph. In 1970, the
percentage
 of each of the four countries was lower than 35
percent
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per cent
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.
Philippines
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The Philippines
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 and
Malaysia
 were almost 30
percent
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per cent
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 of the total
population
.
However
,
Malaysia
 was lower than
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 with a slight margin. Thailand and
Indonesia
 saw remarkable growth during the 30 years after 1970 and
Indonesia
 got Thailand’s
place
 in 2000. Until 1990,
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 was the first
place
 among the others.
However
,
Malaysia
 took first
place
after
this
 year.
Malaysia
 will see a significant rise in 2040 to almost 85
percent
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per cent
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 of
total
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the total
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population
. In 2010,
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 saw a decline which led
Indonesia
 to catch up and
became
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become
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the
Correct article usage
apply
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second
place
 till 2040.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, population, indonesia, malaysia, philippines, place with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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