You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Describe why you are having the party • Give directions on how to get to the venue • Suggest how you can accommodate him/her
Dear Jass,
I hope you're doing well. It's been a
while
since we met each other. Actually, I'm quite excited to invite you to my brother's birthday party at my home on March 1, 2024.
To commence with, I've planned to organize this
event as it's his first birthday after landing in Canada and I am going to make it special for him. As you know, I haven't been able to meet my brother for the last
5 years and I always celebrate this
day alone here. So, I am over the moon because I'm with my brother now. Apart from that, the venue of the party is my home where we used to stay together during our studies. From the Station, it will take 20 minutes of walking to reach my house.
Since I have invited just a few more people to this
celebration. Hence
, we can easily adjust at my house without any problem. I would be most grateful if you could accept my invitation to a celebration.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Best regards,
Tajinder SinghSubmitted by tajinder.panag on
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Task Achievement
To improve Task Response, ensure that each requirement of the prompt is thoroughly and equally addressed. In your letter, you've effectively mentioned the purpose of the party and how your friend can get there. However, details on how you can accommodate them could be more specific. Mentioning whether they'll stay with you or if other arrangements are needed could enhance your response.
Coherence and Cohesion
For better Coherence and Cohesion, aim to link ideas more fluidly between sentences and paragraphs. Using a wider range of connectors or transitional phrases could help establish a smoother flow of ideas. Additionally, try to vary your sentence structures more to keep the reader engaged.