The diagram below shows two different process of manufacturing black tea.

The diagram below shows two different process of manufacturing black tea.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows two different process of manufacturing black tea.
The step-by-step chart illustrates two different processes for manufacturing black
tea
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. At the onset,
it is clear that
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there are five steps in total from picking fresh
tea
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leaves to getting a ready-to-use
tea
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.
Initially
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, the fresh
tea
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bud and 2 top leaves are picked to
then
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be withered using a ventilator that passes the air through leaves on the rack, which dries up to 60% of moisture from the leaves. Afterwards, the process is separated into two different ways: traditional and modern. The natural way consists of rolling the leaves, which releases enzymes from them, and,
subsequently
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, oxidation and later firing in ovens or hot air dryers.
On the other hand
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, the modern method uses cutting
instead
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of rolling. That makes the process quicker and gives smaller granular pieces in the end. The final step is similar to the traditional way of manufacturing, finishing in fermentation that gives the leaves the copper colour and drying in hot conditions like in an air dryer. Eventually, 97% of the moisture is dried,
subsequently
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releasing
flavor
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and aroma.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "subsequently".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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