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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010.
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THE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE
PRODUCTION
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 OF
MILK
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 PER YEAR IN FOUR NATIONS IN 1990, 2000, AND 2010.
OVERALL
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, IN ALL
YEARS
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, THE NETHERLANDS EXPERIENCED THE HIGHEST
PRODUCTION
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 AMOUNT IN
LITRES
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 COMPARED,
WHILE
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 GUATEMALA OCCUPIED THE
LAST
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 PLACE WITH THE LEAST
PRODUCTION
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 OF
MILK
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. IN THESE 2 DECADES, THE NETHERLANDS EXHIBITED THE TOPMOST
MILK
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PRODUCTION
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 AMOUNT IN
LITRES
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 COMPARED WITH OTHERS. IT PROVED TO BE 11262000 IN 1990, DECREASED TO 11155000 IN 2000, AND HIT THE HIGHEST POINT IN 2010 WHICH PRODUCED 11466000
LITRES
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 OF
MILK
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.
ALTHOUGH
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 AUSTRIA WAS EXTREMELY CLOSE TO THE NETHERLANDS IN
MILK
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PRODUCTION
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 IN 1990 WHICH HAD ONLY
16000
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A 16000
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LITRES
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 DIFFERENCE, IN THE FOLLOWING
YEARS
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, IT DIVED TO 9165000
LITRES
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 OVER THE COURSE OF 20
YEARS
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. REGARDING THE OTHER AREAS, TANZANIA BEGAN WITH 87000
LITRES
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 OF
MILK
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PRODUCTION
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 IN 1990 AND SURGED TO 155000
LITRES
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 IN 2010.
CONVERSELY
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, GUATEMALA INDICATED THE LEAST
MILK
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PRODUCTION
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 IN ALL
YEARS
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 WHICH DEMONSTRATES THE LOWEST IN 1990 WITH 26000.
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, IT SKYROCKETED TO 84000 UNTIL 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, milk, years, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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