The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010.
THE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE
PRODUCTION
OF
MILK
PER YEAR IN FOUR NATIONS IN 1990, 2000, AND 2010.
OVERALL
, IN ALL
YEARS
, THE NETHERLANDS EXPERIENCED THE HIGHEST
PRODUCTION
AMOUNT IN
LITRES
COMPARED,
WHILE
GUATEMALA OCCUPIED THE
LAST
PLACE WITH THE LEAST
PRODUCTION
OF
MILK
. IN THESE 2 DECADES, THE NETHERLANDS EXHIBITED THE TOPMOST
MILK
PRODUCTION
AMOUNT IN
LITRES
COMPARED WITH OTHERS. IT PROVED TO BE 11262000 IN 1990, DECREASED TO 11155000 IN 2000, AND HIT THE HIGHEST POINT IN 2010 WHICH PRODUCED 11466000
LITRES
OF
MILK
.
ALTHOUGH
AUSTRIA WAS EXTREMELY CLOSE TO THE NETHERLANDS IN
MILK
PRODUCTION
IN 1990 WHICH HAD ONLY
16000
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LITRES
DIFFERENCE, IN THE FOLLOWING
YEARS
, IT DIVED TO 9165000
LITRES
OVER THE COURSE OF 20
YEARS
. REGARDING THE OTHER AREAS, TANZANIA BEGAN WITH 87000
LITRES
OF
MILK
PRODUCTION
IN 1990 AND SURGED TO 155000
LITRES
IN 2010.
CONVERSELY
, GUATEMALA INDICATED THE LEAST
MILK
PRODUCTION
IN ALL
YEARS
WHICH DEMONSTRATES THE LOWEST IN 1990 WITH 26000.
THEN
, IT SKYROCKETED TO 84000 UNTIL 2010.
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