the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The given bar chart compares
weekly
Correct article usage
the weekly
income
spent by families
on
eight different categories in the Change preposition
in
year
1968 and 2018.
From the bar Fix the agreement mistake
years
chart
it is clear in 1968, Add a comma
chart,
majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
families
’ weekly income
were
spent on the food Change the verb form
was
category
, while
the
fuel and power Correct article usage
apply
was
the least Change the verb form
were
category
families
spent their amount of money on. However
, in 2018, families
spent most of their money in the leisure category
,
and spent the lowest proportion of their Remove the comma
apply
income
on the
personal goods. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, based on the information, we can see that in the span of 50 years, people has
changed their way of consumption.
In 1968, Change the verb form
have
families
spent the highest proportion of weekly income
on food (35%). On the contrary
, 10% was spent each on housing and clothing category
. Furthermore
, only less than 10% was spent each on fuel/power, household goods, personal goods, transport, and leisure categories.
On the other hand
, in 2018, families
spent most of their money on the leisure category
(22%), followed with
Change preposition
by
housing
and food Correct article usage
the housing
category
with 18% and 16% of weekly income
respectively. The rest of the categories had the
spending proportion of less than 20% each.Correct article usage
a
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