YOU HAVE A BUSINESS PRESENTATION IN WHICH YOU WANT TO USE EQUIPMENT FOR WHICH YOU NEED ONE OF YOUR COLLEAGUES TO HELP YOU IN ITS OPERATION. WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR COLLEAGUE AND ASK HIM TO HELP YOU. When and where is your presentation Which equipment you have to use How he can help you
Dear Jass,
I hope you are doing great. I am writing
this
letter to ask you to assist me in arranging and operating different devices during my presentation on March 1, 2024.
To commence with, the venue of this
event is the Holiday Inn, Toronto. Apart from that, I am going to represent 60 People here in Hall 1 and it will start at 10 am. This
presentation is very essential for me as it creates a deep impact on my career in this
company. So, you have to be there in advance around 9 AM.
Moreover
, the hotel will provide all types of equipment such
as speakers, a projector and a screen. However
, I need your help to set it up and also
technical support in case of an emergency. Moreover
, I bought a new laptop recently and am not quite familiar with it. That is
why, I require your support in this
presentation. I would be very grateful if you provide me with assistance in this
situation.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Tajinder SinghSubmitted by tajinder.panag on
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Task Response
To enhance task response, focus on providing more specific details about the purpose of the presentation and include a brief note on how your colleague's assistance will directly impact its success.
Coherence and Cohesion
For improved coherence and cohesion, maintain paragraph connectivity by using more transitional phrases that link ideas and paragraphs together. This will ensure a smooth flow of information throughout the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite