The maps give information about the developments which took place in the island.
The map illustrates the changes
of
the beautiful Change preposition
in
island
,starting from empty landscapes into tourist attractions.
First,high demands in tourism have transformed the island
into vacation
destination.Many Add an article
a vacation
building
have been built for the tourists to enjoy and stay Change to a plural noun
buildings
in
the Change preposition
on
island
such
as large
number of accommodations and a big restaurant.Transportation Change the article
a large
the large
network
Fix the agreement mistake
networks
such
as vehicle track
have been placed around the building and footpath so the tourists can easily move around the Change the form of the verb
tracks
island
.Entertainment areas like beaches and pier are also
being introduced to the traveller.Last
and
not least,the reception building has Correct word choice
but
being
constructed on the Change the form of the verb
been
central
of the Replace the word
centre
island
.
Overall
,the developments have changed the natural into a magnificant
landscape.Correct your spelling
magnificent
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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