The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the bar chart illustrates
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of
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a
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research on
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coffe
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coffee
and tea purchasing and
consuming
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habbit
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habit
habits
in five
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cities.
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Adelaide almost all other 4 places people went for a
coffe
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coffee
or
a
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tea in a cafe more than purchasing them , and within the
last
4 weeks ,
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a citizen
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citizen
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of all
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5 towns purchased instant
coffe
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coffee
more than fresh
coffe
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coffee
. In detail, Adelaide is the
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metropolitan
area
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where
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least number of people
had
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went for a
coffeshop
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coffee shop
during
past
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4 weeks and
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slightly less than 50%
from
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the city population.
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, in Melboune nearly 63% urban population went
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a cafe during the same period recording the highest
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among
all 5 cities.
On the other hand
, in Adelaide and Brisbane same number of individuals have purchased fresh coffee during the research period, recording a level of slightly less than 34% from the city crowd , and it is the least amount among all the fresh and instant coffee buyers in
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surveyed
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contray
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contrary
, Hobart is the town where people brought
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, nearly 54% instant coffee
amoung
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among
all the urban areas.
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