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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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table chart demonstrates the percentage of
expenditure
 by people on different items in 2002 in five different countries which are
Ireland
, Italy ,
Spain
,
Sweden
 and
Turkey
.
Overall
,the
expenditure
in
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 products like food ,drinks and tobacco is very high compared to leisure and education.
Turkey
 is the country which spends more than any other
nations
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in
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 two different products.
Firstly
,in food ,drinks and tobacco,
Turkey
 spends the most at 32.14%.Italy and
Sweden
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 expenditures
approximately
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 equal
as
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 16.36% and 15.77% respectively.
Ireland
 spends 28.91% ,
whereas
Spain
 spends 18.80%
in
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this
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 items. Italy spends the highest
in
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 clothing and footwear
as
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 9% and
Sweden
 spends 5.40%
as
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lowest
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 .
expenditure
 in
Ireland
,
Spain
 and
Turkey
 is nearly equal
as
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 6.43%, 6.51% and 6.63% respectively. Leisure and education is the department where people spend
in
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less amount .
Ireland
 and
Spain
spends
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 nearly
about
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2.21 % and 1.98% ,
where
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 Italy and
Sweden
expenditure
 about 3.20% and 3.22%,4.35% is spent in
this
 category as the highest by
Turkey
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, ireland, spain, sweden, turkey with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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