The maps give information about the developments which took place in the island.

The maps give information about the developments which took place in the island.
The layout illustrates the advances on the
island
.
Overall
, what stands out from the diagram is that it has been modernized and urbanized and has
became
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a recreational destination for passengers. As can be seen, before construction the
island
was filled with plants.
However
, after the redevelopment eastern side of the
island
remained unchanged,
the
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western and central
part
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parts
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changed significantly.
In other words
, a pier was constructed which leads people to the
island
. After passing the pier the reception can be seen straightaway, which is in the center of the
island
and back onto the restaurant. It is important to say that the restaurant is on the far side of the
island
.
Also
evident is the reception is surrounded by accommodations, which are both to the east and west of the reception area.
Additionally
, a swimming area has been introduced in the west of the
island
along the beach.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • transformation
  • tourist attractions
  • transportation networks
  • environmental protection
  • recreational areas
  • economic effects
  • cultural shifts
  • utilities and services
  • development
  • implementation
  • impact
  • population
  • wildlife
  • habitats
  • job creation
  • revenue
  • improvements
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