The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The visual chart illustrates the life stages of a salmon.
Overall
, it can be seen there are three categories in the growth of this
species. However
, the development is divided into three phases and it need
eight years in total to enter Change the verb form
needs
adulthoods
.
Fix the agreement mistake
adulthood
Firstly
, the adult salmon migrate from open
sea to the upper river as it is an ideal stream to place their eggs. They will place their eggs in the reeds between small stones. After around 6 months, it turns to become a fry and the size is 3 Correct article usage
the open
until
8 cm. Afterwards, the offspring lives in the lower river that has fast flow for approximately 4 years until they become smolt. Smolt is an adolescence phase for salmon and its size is doubled from the previous stage.
Change preposition
to
Next,
it migrates to the open sea and live
in the open sea for almost five years. Change the verb form
lives
Finally
, they turned into adults with 70 until
76 cm Change preposition
to
length
, and the life cycle repeated from the start.Change preposition
in length
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