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the chart below give informatin on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

the chart below give informatin on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
#informatin #ages #populations #yemen #projections
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Yemen and
Italy
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Italy's
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 population ages in 2000 and
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their
 projections for 2050.
Overall
, the number of people between 15 to 59 were
productied
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predicted
 in the future to be
hight
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high
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 in Yamen before that the
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 was true .
Yemen
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In Yemen
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 in 2000 half of the population were under 14
years
 old,
while
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46.3% were between 15 to 59
years
 followed by 3.6%
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who
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those who
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 were 60
years
 and older.
however
, in the
future
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 the number of
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people from 15 to 59
years
were
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 expected to increase to reach 57.3% , and
as
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for the under 14
years
 will decline to 37%. In
Italy
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Italy,
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 the vast
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majority
majortiy
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majority
 of people were 15 to 59
years
 old
accounted
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 for 61.6%,
while
 the the proportion of
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 ones
were
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 24.1%.
Furthermore
, it
projected
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is projected
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 in 2050 to rise to 42.3%
thus
 will make the 15 - 59
years
 old become 46.2% .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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