The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps depict the transformation of Queen Mary Hospital over four decades, from 1960 to 2000.Over
this
period,the hospital underwent significant changes.The most noticeable adjustment was the replacement of the shopping
centre
and farmland with a pharmacy and cancer
centre
at the end
of the period. In 1960,the west side of the hospital featured a shopping
centre
and farmland,
while
a hospital building and car park occupied the east side.at the beginning of 1980, the Queen Mary underwent some adjustment,the shopping
centre
was reduced to half size and converted into a cancer
centre
.
Additionally
, a pharmacy was established in the space previously occupied by the shopping
centre
, thereby integrating it with the hospital for improved convenience.
Furthermore
,the car park still remained in the backside of the hospital,but the farmland was converted into a nursing school. Looking at 2000,there were modifications to the layout. The Cancer Center expanded .
On the other hand
, the area of nursing school and the car parking has decreased ,
However
, the main hospital building has remained unchanged over
this
time.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructural evolution
  • healthcare facilities
  • technological advancements
  • capacity expansion
  • modernization efforts
  • historical layout
  • landscape adaptation
  • access routes
  • renovation and improvement
  • initial structure
  • environmental considerations
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