The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.
The bar chart shows the scores of
teams
A, B
and C
over four different seasons.
The bar chart illustrates the scores of the three teams
; A, B
and C
in four different seasons. It's crystal clear that team
B
scored far higher than the other two teams
all the seasons but also
it slowly decreased over these time periods.
Overall
, we can clearly see that teams
A and C
were lower than team
B
in all years ( 2002,2003,2004 and 2005) and it goes like this
in all years.
Taking a closer look at 2002, the score of team
B
exceeded that of the other two teams
. Team
A had 5 points
and team
C
had 10 points
. After the year
2002, team
B
slowly decreased year
by year
but it still remained above the points
of the other teams
.
However
, teams
A and C
were rising after 2003. In fact, in 2004, team
B
almost caught up with Team
A but there were still 8 points
so they couldn’t. However
sadly Add a comma
However,
team
C
had always the lowest points
than the other two teams
so it was always at the lowest part of the chart.
In the final year
, all teams
were decreased from the other three years. Even though when we look at the other teams
team
B
still had the highest score. While
teams
A and C
saw their point scores reverse and drop 8 and 5 points
respectivelySubmitted by haticecoza on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
▼
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words teams, b, c, team, points, year with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼