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online shopping seems to be replacing the traditional method of buying. however some buyers are sceptical to this practice. discuss both benefits and risks associated with online shopping

#method #buyers #practice #risks
Online shopping is getting a wider acceptance among people in the contemporary
socoiey
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society
.In a most
hehtic
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hectic
 busy life online shopping is a complete boom for some people.
But
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 opponents of
this
 practice argue that it is an absolute waste of
time
.
However
,in
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 I will examine some benefits and a variety of risks associated with
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online shopping. On the
one
 hand,the proponents argue that it is a super
time saving
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 method as
one
 can shop from
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any corner of the world
going
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 to their websites with the help of
internet
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the internet
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.Being in front of the laptop
one
 can choose their favourite
product
 from the million varieties and options.
For example
 ,a laptop or a mobile can be purchased from
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wast
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 variety of brands and price ranges.
secondly
 the benefit of
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.
The online
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 shopping lovers put forward the idea that it is absolutely
cost effective
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.Rather
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than spending
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time
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travelling to the shop,and roaming around various
shop
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shops
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 for
one
 item ,you can buy everything under an umbrella
cheap
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.Which makes shopping a pleasurable experience.
On the other hand
,the opponents of online shopping
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 that
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it is a waste of
time
 if
one
 is not getting the right
product
.In the I store purchases
one
 can see and feel the
product
 and check the workability which excludes the after purchase depression.
For
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 when
one
 buys a hairdryer,they can test it before
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 it home
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 the customer with higher satisfaction.
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 there are a significant number
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of scam
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scam
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scams
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 hidden under many distance shopping.
Eventhough
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Even though
they display mesmerising
product
 photos and displays ,the quality would be basic and
inturn
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 people are not getting what they want.
Thus
 many buyers might had to undergo
custome
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customer
 syndrome after many fraudulent shopping experiences. In conclusion,I would say that online shopping is extremely effective in
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 and
cost effectiveness
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cost-effectiveness
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,at the same it has
the
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inherent dangers like Samos and not buying the right
product
.
Hence
 it is always advisable to strike a balance between these two,in order for a better shopping experience.
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one
need
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 to be wise enough before making any purchase decisions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled convenience
  • vast selection
  • digital platforms
  • comparison shopping
  • impulsive buying
  • aggressive marketing tactics
  • risk of fraud
  • counterfeit goods
  • compromised personal data
  • immediate satisfaction
  • physical examination
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