The diagrams below show the development of small fishing village its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort.

The diagrams below show the development of small fishing village its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort.
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The two maps depict alterations that took place in a small coastal village in Europe over the course of 30 years, starting in 1974.
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, it can be seen that there are several major changes mainly involving the construction of hotels and road infrastructure. As the village underwent major developments and resulted in providing services to the tourists as its primary economic activity has stood in place of fishing,
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, Harbour disappeared and was replaced with a beach stretching from west to east. Another striking change is the expansion of the village with the establishment of
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along the coastline on both sides of the rural area.
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, offering sufficient resorts to visitors.
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developments were the woodland removal to the west of the olive trees
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and farmland which was replaced by a golf course.
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, the main road has been laid to cope with the increased traffic in the area and provide easy access to other villages. It is interesting to note that fruits and vegetables required for hotels were supplied from extended farmland in 2004.
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