The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
The bar chart provides information regarding spending on consumer goods in
France
and the UK
in 2010.
Overall
the UK
spent more than France
. Cars are the most popular goods, while
perfume and cameras are the least for the UK
and France
respectively.
Thus
the car expenditure in the UK
is 50 thousand
higher than in France
and equals around 450 thousand
. Meanwhile, France
bought more computers and perfume, in total it cost approximately 375 thousand
and 200 thousand
respectively which is about 25 and about 60 thousand
more than in the UK
. But there is an abnormal difference in camera consumption. For instance
, the UK
spent a little bit more than 350 thousand
, while
France
near 150 thousand
. The second biggest distinction is in book expenses, which is around 100 thousand
extra for the United Kingdom and in total is over 400 thousand
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