The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

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The bar chart provides information regarding spending on consumer goods in

France

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and the

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in 2010.

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the

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spent more than

France

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. Cars are the most popular goods,

while

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perfume and cameras are the least for the

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and

France

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respectively.

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the car expenditure in the

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is 50

thousand

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higher than in

France

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and equals around 450

thousand

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. Meanwhile,

France

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bought more computers and perfume, in total it cost approximately 375

thousand

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and 200

thousand

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respectively which is about 25 and about 60

thousand

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more than in the

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. But there is an abnormal difference in camera consumption.

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, the

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spent a little bit more than 350

thousand

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while

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France

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near 150

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. The second biggest distinction is in book expenses, which is around 100

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extra for the United Kingdom and in total is over 400

thousand

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The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreighn language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe, more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done.

In spite of the advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be down about this problem?

Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Other believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way

Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?