The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
The bar chart provides information regarding spending on consumer goods in
France
and the
UK
in 2010.
Overall
the
UK
spent more than
France
. Cars are the most popular goods,
while
perfume and cameras are the least for the
UK
and
France
respectively.
Thus
the car expenditure in the
UK
is 50
thousand
higher than in
France
and equals around 450
thousand
. Meanwhile,
France
bought more computers and perfume, in total it cost approximately 375
thousand
and 200
thousand
respectively which is about 25 and about 60
thousand
more than in the
UK
. But there is an abnormal difference in camera consumption.
For instance
, the
UK
spent a little bit more than 350
thousand
,
while
France
near 150
thousand
. The second biggest distinction is in book expenses, which is around 100
thousand
extra for the United Kingdom and in total is over 400
thousand
.
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  • expenditure
  • consumer goods
  • chart
  • countries
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  • categories
  • consumer spending
  • trends
  • proportions
  • statistics
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
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