The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The line chart illustrates the number of foreign visitors to the

coast

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,

mountains

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and

lakes

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in a country in Europe from

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1987 to 2007.

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, the

coast

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stayed as

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remained

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the most visited place. The numerous of visitors

of

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to

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the

mountains

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remained stable,

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however

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a

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bunch of tourists, who visited the

lakes

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increased

significatly

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significantly

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then

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dramatically and dropped

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of the period. The

coast

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stayed

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the most popular area among foreigners over the entire time. In 1987, there were twice as many people

in

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on

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the

coast

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as in the

mountains

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, at 40 and 20

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, respectively.

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proportion did not change after two decades in 2007, with just over 70 and around 30 thousands of tourists. In 1992, the number of people stayed

same

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the same

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for

two

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least popular areas, the

mountains

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and

lakes

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. A bunch

foreign

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of foreign

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people, who visited the

lakes

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increased steadily and

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dramatically until 2002, when it reached its maximum.

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of the period, it is noticeable that the numerous of overseas travelers increased in all of three areas.