the table below gives information on consumer spending on differnet items in five different countries in 2002.
The given table compares the percentage of spending money on three different categories among five
countries
.
Overall
, it is obvious that in all countries
expenditure on food
, drinks, and tobacco
was the highest proportion
that people had
paid. Unnecessary verb
apply
Also
the highest Add a comma
Also,
proportion
for clothing and footwear, and leisure and education was different from food
and tobacco
based on countries
.
In 2002, turkish
people spent the greatest Change the capitalization
Turkish
proportion
of their income on food
, drinks, and tobacco
with
32.14%, followed by Change preposition
at
ireland
(28.91%) Change the capitalization
Ireland
then
Correct word choice
and then
spain
(18.80%). Change the capitalization
Spain
On the
contrary
the lowest Add a comma
contrary,
proportion
of expenditure on food
and tobacco
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Italy
and Change preposition
in Italy
sweden
with 16.36% and 15.77%, respectively.
Change the capitalization
Sweden
On the other hand
, although
Italian people had spent small
amount on Add an article
a small
food
and tobacco
, for clothing and footwear they had spent much more than the other countries
with 9%. In addition
, This
is the case for Sweden which they had spent second the most among the given countries
with 3.22% on leisure and education, after turkey
with 4.35%.Capitalize word
Turkey
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