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The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.
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The pie chart provides data about the
proportion
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 of five different kinds of
books
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 sold by a
bookseller
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 in 1972, 1992 and 2012.
Overall
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, both in 1992 and 2012
biography
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 had the lowest
percentage
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 of
books
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 sold by a
bookseller
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, meanwhile,
adult
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fiction
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 had the highest
proportion
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 of
books
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 sold by a
bookseller
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. As can be seen, in 1972 others had the highest
proportion
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 of
books
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 sold by a
bookseller
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 with the
rate
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 of 25 per
cent
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,
whereas
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, travel had the lowest
percentage
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 of
books
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 sold by a
bookseller
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 at 15 per
cent
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. The proportions of
adult
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fiction
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, children’s
fiction
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 and
biography
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 were the same at 20 per
cent
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. In 1992
adult
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fiction
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 had the highest
rate
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 of
books
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 sold by a
bookseller
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 at 25 per
cent
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,
while
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,
biography
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 had the lowest
percentage
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 of
books
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 sold by a
bookseller
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 at 15 per
cent
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. The percentages
of
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for
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 travel and others were pretty similar accounting for 18 and 20 per
cent
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 respectively. In the year of 2012
adult
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fiction
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 had the highest
proportion
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 of
books
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 sold by a
bookseller
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 with
the
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rate
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 of 45 per
cent
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 which was almost twice much than the
rate
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 of children’s
fiction
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 which
had
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 25 per
cent
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. The rates of travel and others were quite similar accounting for 10 and 12 per
cent
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 respectively. In 2012
biography
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 had the lowest
percentage
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 of
books
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 sold by a
bookseller
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 with the
rate
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 of 8 per
cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, books, bookseller, biography, percentage, adult, fiction, rate, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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